Despair
Posted in Uncategorized on 01/19/2008 05:21 pm by Ali BalwegI’m in Photocommunication this semester and our first assignment is a photograph that tells a story and elicts an emotion. As you can obviously tell, I choose depression. Not the happiest of topics… but it gets the veiwer’s attention and draws them in, making them think. Anywho, the assignment isn’t due for a couple weeks, but I had the opportunity to join Jordan in his studio this afternoon and took advantage of it. That being said, I haven’t decided which photo I want to turn in, so any input would be fantastic, thanks!
January 20th, 2008 at 12:34 pm
I think you need to get lighting on both sides, get rid of those shadows. Also try and attach the paper on the bottle so it looks like it’s actually part of it. But other then that they look really good!
January 20th, 2008 at 7:57 pm
I agree about the bottle label. Otherwise it certainly does bring out an emotion!
January 20th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
Shadows seem more disparaging to me.
January 21st, 2008 at 9:56 am
I can’t decide if I like being able to see the paper attached to the bottle or not, but I agree with Jordan about the shadows.